looking for critiques

[Keith_Hopkins]

Anyone that is willing to critique me for certification may go to my website to review my selection of images that were rejected. I think there are some really good ones. I am asking which ones would you remove.

http://www.khopkinsphoto.com/ppaonly.html


Thanks for your help

[David_A._Lottes]

Hi Keith
Your 1st communion photograph is georgeous! So yes there are some very good ones. The cake can go and the golf guys are a nice idea but the lighting is too dark on the subjects and too bright in the background. In general I think your very close. Thanks for sharing these rejected submissions with us. That took allot of guts and it will be very helpful for anyone submitting prints to see a portfolio that didn't get through. Your almost there IMO.

[Keith_Hopkins]

Thanks for your opinion Dave. I really appreciate. There always comes some fear when you your images up for critique.

Thank Again
Keith

[D._Craig_Flory]

Hi Keith;

If you could make all 20 equal to #09 & #14 you would have it aced !!!

[Derek_Alvarez]

Hello Kieth

Overall they are good , I would take out the Golfers, the Family with the dogs,

Mostly for the posing and lighting issues.

[Keith_Hopkins]

Thanks Derek and Craig. I appreicate your input.