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  1. #1
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    Default critique please!

    is this photo good enough for print competition? Do you think it needs to be more dramatic? in terms of editing. Because the more I apply tona contrast, it gets very grainy. Is grain that bad at all?


    Blanca Duran
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    Default Re: critique please!

    Can't comment on competition.... But I love it!
    Cropping some off camera left would put it closer to rule of thirds.
    Vance Wagener, CPP Liaison

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    Default Re: critique please!

    Not sure of the message or the story, maybe a title would help??. The choice of lens makes his feet way bigger than his head and the bright white sky on the very edge on viewer's right pulls my eye out of the image.
    Cheri MacCallum
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    Default Re: critique please!

    oh thank you for your reviews..I think I see what you say about the thirds, and the bright side. i'm going to adjust that and see how it looks. I will upload it again!

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