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    Default Just need some Comments

    Just need a few comments from all of you my considerations for this years competition.
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    I'll leave the cc to better folks.

    I have a thing for images of old guys- so I enjoyed yours.

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    Come on everyone, Post your thoughts.
    I purposely am holding off as I am traveling and on my inlaws computer at the moment. Lets give ideas and imput.
    Keith
    Keith A. Howe
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    Quote Originally Posted by Diane_Davis View Post

    I have a thing for images of old guys- so I enjoyed yours.
    Let me introduce myself.........
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    These are a little too small to get really bold with the compliments, but first pass gets you a "Congratulations" I'm seeing better control of light than I usually see, and I'm also seeing a refreshing reality and simplicity in the message. I'm thinking that he last two would benefit from a subtle separation light like the second image because it creates an enhanced sense of depth. These definitely have potential.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Keith_A_Howe View Post
    Come on everyone, Post your thoughts.
    I purposely am holding off as I am traveling and on my inlaws computer at the moment. Lets give ideas and imput.
    Keith
    Frankly I don't critique on this forum because I know you will pick it apart more according to PPA judging guidlines.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PhotogCraig View Post
    Frankly I don't critique on this forum because I know you will pick it apart more according to PPA judging guidlines.
    Considering that this forum is OurPPA, I would say that using PPA judging guidelines would be appropriate.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave_Cisco View Post
    Considering that this forum is OurPPA, I would say that using PPA judging guidelines would be appropriate.
    I didn't say it was not the best, but it is going to be the reason that many will not give a critique.

    By the way a critique even from a non photographer can be of value.

    A critique can be your best friend if your open to take the information and look closer at the points that were made.
    Craig Willes

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    COWARDS!

    Just kidding!

    The third is a good image for competition. The fourth is good also, but tone down the hands a bit. The first leaves me thinking about composition. Not sure of it. The second image is nice. The Lighting is definitely controlled, but lacks some ... OOMPH! Otherwise, a nice image!

    I would say that the third image would merit, with the third or second being possibilities.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave_Cisco View Post
    Let me introduce myself.........
    ROFL. You might be disappointed.


    Mark-
    Thanks for putting yourself out there. We all learn from it.

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