View Full Version : Wedding print comps please CC

01-03-2008, 05:53 PM
I entered print comp 4 years ago for the first time and scored 2 merits. Since then several 78's. Here are several I'd love to take to comp (and print for bridal shows). The one is taken after Jackies Super Monday. The other senior girl has been another choice.

1.about 30 minutes work done to it. http://www.betterimagephoto.com/ppa/glambride.jpg
2.Almost SOOC http://www.betterimagephoto.com/ppa/fishprintcomp.jpg


01-03-2008, 05:53 PM

01-08-2008, 07:46 PM
Can I get some comments. The harsher (closer they put me to over 80) the better.

01-08-2008, 08:30 PM
In my opinion, the white on white bridal is overdone- however it is a new technique for a senior. ;)

(In case you miss my humor- they don't show up on my machine)

01-08-2008, 08:53 PM
Hi Scott;

I wish the couples would wait to set up the times for the wedding day till we could school them on the optimum times.

The one problem I have with the 1st image is the hot spot on her gown causing the viewers eyes to go to her breast. I'd tone that down a lot.

The fisheye image is really cool. By far my favorite.

On number 3, her hand is not posed well. The lighting is a bit too harsh, for a woman. It's not butterfly lighting nor is it loop lighting ... it ended up in between.

The 1st outdoor pose has the wall catching my eyes more than her. If a reflector had been used, at a 45º angle, she would have been seen better.

On the last one her face is flat and has no modeling at all. The tilt does nothing to help the presentation.