06-01-2007, 04:25 PM
I like the guy by himself. Nice short lighting. Would have liked him to be a bit less hunched over.
The shot with both of them looks like it's trying to tell a story, but I can't tell when the story is, and I'm not crazy about the pose of the girl and the perspective issue. As she's the dominant element, it detracts a bit. The size of the image is not making it any easier to read the story.
The girl by herself is not moving me. Broad lighting is not doing this image any favors, and I'd like to see her arm away from her body, and she seems a bit cut off on the RHS.