View Full Version : Help me go 4 for 4! Need critique on last image.

06-28-2012, 11:54 PM
I sealed 3 of my 4 images at SWPPA. This will be my first time entering IPC and I would love to grab that last merit!

Can I get one last critique on this image please before I submit it?

06-28-2012, 11:58 PM
Sorry, forgot to add my title...

Breathless Anticipation

06-29-2012, 02:25 AM
I want to title this "Calm Before The Storm" because she looks so peaceful.

06-29-2012, 05:30 AM
A few things that I see are the backs of the hands and how they are posed make them look masculine and large. Her skin tones are uneven. Her face and belly look are a different color and tone than her arms.

Nothing you can do about her hands, but I would recommend evening out skin tones.

06-29-2012, 11:17 AM
I think Cheri is right on, the arms are very dark compared to the hands, belly and face. There are also color differences in the skin tones (around the elbows look blue while the forearms are very warm).
It's a very nice image with good expression and nice posing with the exception of the back of the hand.