View Full Version : Three possibles for Northwest

02-09-2012, 09:34 PM
Please feel free to CC, and be tough, I am not yet married to them! And I see a few problems with the horse one already on the upper corners, I will crop those out. Just trying to get more input and more input and more input!



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02-09-2012, 10:17 PM
I like all 3 of these. That first one is far better than the other with them laughing.

02-09-2012, 11:21 PM
Thanks Mark. Any changes that I should be looking at making?

02-10-2012, 02:58 AM
the third one is my fave. love that expression! i can't stop looking at the 2nd one, trying to figure it out, so i'd say thats a good thing. i would like a little more light on the bride's face in the first one. and it bothers me a bit that i can't see the horses tail at all. i'm no expert, but hope that helps.

02-10-2012, 03:00 AM
Thanks Mark. Any changes that I should be looking at making?

I'm not a judge, so I'll let more qualified folks advise you. I haven't even competed in 10 years now.

02-10-2012, 03:27 AM
Should the horse's ears be pointing forward? I find it incredible that the bottom of her dress doesn't look wet; with the comment on the tail, that was a good catch -- did it accidentally get cut out?

02-10-2012, 03:33 AM
No, the tail is there, you can see it if you look underneath and through. He just has some tall thick legs and was rather relaxed so it is hanging behind him. Nothing I ca do for the ears, but I will still enter the image.

02-10-2012, 03:54 AM
Gail, consider cropping the horse tighter. The story is their connection, not the canyon walls. Also look at it flipped the dress might lead really well into their faces. Lastly they are dead center on your board.