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gailcarver
02-09-2012, 08:34 PM
Please feel free to CC, and be tough, I am not yet married to them! And I see a few problems with the horse one already on the upper corners, I will crop those out. Just trying to get more input and more input and more input!

Confidant

http://gailcarver.zenfolio.com/img/s11/v36/p56545832-4.jpg


Alien World

http://gailcarver.zenfolio.com/img/s11/v37/p820513410-5.jpg

Want Some?

http://gailcarver.zenfolio.com/img/s3/v39/p595617072-4.jpg

Mark_Turner
02-09-2012, 09:17 PM
I like all 3 of these. That first one is far better than the other with them laughing.

gailcarver
02-09-2012, 10:21 PM
Thanks Mark. Any changes that I should be looking at making?

sindisue
02-10-2012, 01:58 AM
the third one is my fave. love that expression! i can't stop looking at the 2nd one, trying to figure it out, so i'd say thats a good thing. i would like a little more light on the bride's face in the first one. and it bothers me a bit that i can't see the horses tail at all. i'm no expert, but hope that helps.

Mark_Turner
02-10-2012, 02:00 AM
Thanks Mark. Any changes that I should be looking at making?

I'm not a judge, so I'll let more qualified folks advise you. I haven't even competed in 10 years now.

StreitPhoto2002
02-10-2012, 02:27 AM
Should the horse's ears be pointing forward? I find it incredible that the bottom of her dress doesn't look wet; with the comment on the tail, that was a good catch -- did it accidentally get cut out?

gailcarver
02-10-2012, 02:33 AM
No, the tail is there, you can see it if you look underneath and through. He just has some tall thick legs and was rather relaxed so it is hanging behind him. Nothing I ca do for the ears, but I will still enter the image.

Jeff_Dachowski
02-10-2012, 02:54 AM
Gail, consider cropping the horse tighter. The story is their connection, not the canyon walls. Also look at it flipped the dress might lead really well into their faces. Lastly they are dead center on your board.