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rhondastarkart
02-01-2012, 03:15 AM
realized i didn't sharpen for web so it looks soft here ..
http://www.ppa.com/community/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=11218&stc=1&d=1328066020

rhondastarkart
02-01-2012, 07:20 PM
Is it that bad?

Dori_Arnold
02-01-2012, 08:12 PM
It does have to be sharp. I really like the feel of the image. You might do a little work on her eyes - they are the center of attention and could use a little more impact.

Avery_Munger
02-01-2012, 08:38 PM
I'd bring the white of the shirt down a bit. It competes with her face and it's the brightest thing in the shot - i.e. eyes go to the shirt.

rhondastarkart
02-01-2012, 08:38 PM
thanks dori for the feedback!

rhondastarkart
02-01-2012, 08:42 PM
thanks avery .. will do!

Joe_Galioto
02-01-2012, 08:48 PM
rhonda
a nice portrait
it could usea stronger light ratio or a more defined direction of light
ask if you need this explained further