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amyebr3
06-22-2011, 10:53 PM
HI! I would appreciate any and all comments on the possibility of this being a good competition piece. Please feel free to rip it apart as I learn more from that than just about anything else. Thank you in advance,
amy

amyebr3
06-22-2011, 10:53 PM
Sorry! Did not mean to attach the one with my logo thingy on it! :(

GregYager
06-22-2011, 11:27 PM
Let's start with welcome to the forums Amy. Glad to have you here.

The logo Thingy isn't an issue so don't sweat that.

The first thing I notice is her hand laying limp with the top square on to the camera along with the somewhat flat lighting. It's a nice image but using a reflector to add dimension to your lighting would help tremendously. You'll get more in depth critiques from others but I had a few minutes before my next shoot and decided to throw my two cents in the pot.

Ron_Jackson
06-23-2011, 01:02 AM
I' sure not the portrait guy but, I think it makes a stronger head and shoulders image. Just my thoughts. Try re-cropping to a H&S and see what you think.

ChontelleBrown
06-23-2011, 01:48 AM
No critique from me, just saying hi! Congrats on your IPC entries.

Chontelle

amyebr3
06-24-2011, 12:44 AM
Thanks all!
Chontelle, Congratulations yourself!! Are you going to the state in August?