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Greg_Haag
12-02-2009, 01:21 AM
I would love some feedback on this image for print competition.
Thanks,
Greg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/greghaag/NC1web.jpg

Joe_Campanellie
12-02-2009, 04:55 AM
Just my 2cents...an awful lot of red. So much so that it's overpowering your subjects.

Seems to be some modeling on the girl in the back on her skin...probably from the stage lights and I'm not seeing any life in her eyes. Probably because she is somewhat behind the curtain and not in the light.

In my opinion and just mine...would need some work to get it to merit. But, get Keith and some of the others to take a look also.

Greg_Haag
12-02-2009, 12:01 PM
Joe,
Thanks for the feedback, I tried to tone some thing down and bring more attention to the subject with this version. I am trying to use shot from my daily work for competition (this one was for a local theatre), not sure if it were to get used for competition what category it should be in.
Thanks again,
Greg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m55/greghaag/NC1.jpg

Joe_Campanellie
12-02-2009, 02:28 PM
That's better. You need a good title to bring attention to the girl in the front because she looks so apprehensive.

Something like "Back Stage Jitters"

Greg_Haag
12-02-2009, 05:09 PM
Joe
Thanks for your help.
Greg