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mari_latozas
11-12-2009, 08:41 PM
Hi,
These are a few more that I was considering so once again, I will take any input that anyone has to offer.
Thank you so much.
Mari

http://i442.photobucket.com/albums/qq150/marippa/redlightbluelight.jpg

http://i442.photobucket.com/albums/qq150/marippa/morninginmatera.jpg

http://i442.photobucket.com/albums/qq150/marippa/watchdog_16x20.jpg


http://i442.photobucket.com/albums/qq150/marippa/takingabreak.jpg

Keith_A_Howe
11-14-2009, 01:26 AM
Ok
Light house - already talked about.

Winding street. - Good. I would like to suggest it could be stronger by removing the orangish red flowers in the lower center of the image. Bring out the blue umbrella below them more or change it to red if you are really good at PS.

Sheep Dog - Of the 2 sheep images this is the stronger. Look at the light direction. On the dog image there is some light direction striking the camera right side of the subjects giving more demension and impact. On the sheep herder, the light is striking his back and shoulders making him appear despondant or withdrawn from the story. If the light lead into him or was back lighting him and riming the sheep the impact would be so much stronger.

Sorry I took so long getting this response out.
Good Luck
Keith

mari_latozas
11-15-2009, 09:31 PM
Hi Keith,
Thank you for the input. I am making the changes on the light house. I never noticed the dark area around the red light. There are spot lights under the red light so thats where the glow on the post is coming from.
I deleted the images on photobucket, I didn't know it would take them off my thread....oops.
I'm not going to go with the dog images, I really didn't feel they were big contenders, I thought I would ask.

I did make the changes on the other two rainy images, I liked those better.

Thanks again for your input, you always give such good advice.
I hope your situation with the credit cards is settled.

Mari