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Cassandra_Sullivan
01-28-2009, 06:16 PM
Print deadline is in 2 weeks!
Any critiques or title suggestions? These are the images suggested by my image reviewer @ IUSA to enter...
1.
http://www.cassandrasphotography.com/upload/12331662126137_crystal.jpg

2.
http://www.cassandrasphotography.com/upload/12331662312662_troy.jpg

3. I'm now thinking I should make the image bigger...
http://www.cassandrasphotography.com/upload/12331662489432_iris.jpg

4.
http://www.cassandrasphotography.com/upload/12331662672389_white_flower.jpg

Keith_A_Howe
01-29-2009, 12:48 AM
Cassandra, I am exhausted from an early - EARLY - flight today. I have sessions all day tomorrow, but if you wanna give me a call tomorrow night I have a few tweaks for you. Do you have my number?
Keith

Jeff_Dachowski
01-29-2009, 03:51 AM
Cassandra ,
on number 2 consider how it might look if you rotate your image clockwise about 15 degrees. It might have a bit more tension.

Jeff

Cassandra_Sullivan
01-29-2009, 02:34 PM
Cassandra, I am exhausted from an early - EARLY - flight today. I have sessions all day tomorrow, but if you wanna give me a call tomorrow night I have a few tweaks for you. Do you have my number?
Keith

I have a ph# number - ends in 6 - is that the right one?
I have an appt this evening - what's the latest I can call?

Cassandra_Sullivan
01-29-2009, 02:35 PM
Cassandra ,
on number 2 consider how it might look if you rotate your image clockwise about 15 degrees. It might have a bit more tension.

Jeff

So the image would be placed tilted on the 16x20? I don't have room to crop it - that's a full-frame image.

D._Craig_Flory
01-29-2009, 06:50 PM
Hi Cassandra;

The first image looks very light and could use some more contrast as well.

I would flip the 2nd pose so he is on the 3rd quadrant. There is something very bright showing behind his hand and also at his ankle that need to be removed. I would also crop off a bit of the right side. (right side before flipping)

On the 3td image, you have the flower pretty much centered. Think about what the focal point is.I would move the subject layer so the main part is about on the 4th quadrant. I would also change from pure black to a very deep magenta.

On the last one .. You have the main point of interest nicely on the 1st quadrant. I would flip it so it would now be on the 4th quadrant.

Jeff_Dachowski
01-30-2009, 01:40 AM
Cassandra,
I cant believe I am going to say this....I agree with Craig!

Here is what I think looks best. Of course you need to do it to the original, not a super low rez avatar size image!

D._Craig_Flory
01-30-2009, 01:49 PM
Cassandra,
I cant believe I am going to say this....I agree with Craig!

Here is what I think looks best. Of course you need to do it to the original, not a super low rez avatar size image!

Hi Jeff;

It had to happen at least once. :p :D :cool:

cat_broderick
02-02-2009, 01:19 PM
I agree with flipping #2-the arm is a nice leading line. Would also love to see 4 flipped. Gotta get mine together today...