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MarilynDillon
08-28-2008, 11:28 PM
Thanks all - you are the best -- this is my first regional competition. I know these files aren't the best for a full analysis but if I could get an idea for any potential.

Erica_Larsh
08-28-2008, 11:45 PM
Marilyn,

I like this image much better. I like where you positioned her and I think the doors are fantastic. The vignette is a little heavy to me, though. But, like I wrote in the other post, I have no comp experience so just take it with a grain of salt. :-)

Jon_Curtis
08-29-2008, 12:07 AM
Marilyn,

The vignette is a little heavy to me,

+1

Take it down a notch and IMO you have a very nice image.

KirkDarling
08-29-2008, 12:11 AM
Or try keeping the vignette but slightly desaturating the image for a vintage look. Given the architecture, the dress, and the bare feet, I think you can do that.

I like this image a lot.