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Debra_Collins
05-26-2008, 10:12 PM
I am desperately looking for a 4th to complete my case (yeah I know - I'm late as usual) Would this work?

Title? maybe "want my autograph?"

http://www.waterlilygallery.net/pix/watts-ppa.jpg

D._Craig_Flory
05-26-2008, 10:34 PM
Hi Debra;

As a filler it's fine. But, it will not come close to a merit. If in a comp. where scores are still given, I'd give it a 72, as presented.

The child is cute but #1 the pose is not a profile nor is it a ¾ view and the far eye is cut in half. #2 her finger is amputated as is her far arm #3 her blouse is distracting #4 there is a hot spot on her neck. #5 the background color doesn't work for me. #6 I'd crop a bit off the right side so the small bright area on the background doesn't distract.

So othes can see it bigger ... with a couple changes:

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i93/DC47/AutographSeeker.jpg

Debra_Collins
05-27-2008, 03:13 AM
Thanks for the honest reply Craig. I'll keep looking for something else to fill the case I think. I hate to waste a spot on something that I know has no chance. At least the dad liked it.