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AmyElliott
03-24-2008, 03:53 AM
How do you guys think this one will do? I hate the name to, and ideas?

Amy

D._Craig_Flory
03-24-2008, 01:10 PM
Hi Amy;

I like this a lot more than the teen girl. Final placement could be a bit better. And I'm not into the shape the child is in but am not sure how I'd change it. I'll mull it over and post again.

As for title ideas ... "Innocence" comes to mind.

AmyElliott
03-24-2008, 01:22 PM
Thank you. You meanthe placement of the baby in the image, or in the mount? Like I said I am new to PPA print comp, and it is killing me:)

Thank you for your help
Amy

D._Craig_Flory
03-24-2008, 01:45 PM
Hi Amy;

Ok, here is another way of presenting this. I know now what I didn't like about the diamond shape ... it connotates sharp and hard while a baby is soft and precious.

Here is my rendition. I hope it gives you some ideas. The one thing that still bothers me are the shadows behind her body. Maybe you can start again and not have the shadows so pronounced. Here is "Innocence".

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i93/DC47/Innocence.jpg

AmyElliott
03-24-2008, 01:57 PM
:) Thank you. I am learning so much from you.
Amy

D._Craig_Flory
03-24-2008, 05:10 PM
Hi Amy;

I'm happy that I was a help. I also recommend that you join your state and or sub-state sized photography association. Attending programs is an excellent way to move forward. Plus, being able to take images along and ask advice from other members will help you as well. What state are you in ?