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Laura_Piazza
03-16-2008, 08:12 PM
I did a mother/son photoshoot yesterday and this one photo really struck me because of the bond between the mother and baby. I liked the babies bum in the photo, but am thinking the tighter crop may make it more about the relationship of mom and newborn.
I'd love some opinions/suggestions and feedback on whether either of these would be strong enough to do well at competition.
You can go to the below URL to see a larger version.
http://www.naturalexpressions-photo.com/nhppa/

thanks as always!

Noelle_Zaleski
03-16-2008, 10:55 PM
I really like the tighter crop because it makes it more intimate. I bet the mom will love it. I cannot comment on comp.

Laura_Piazza
03-16-2008, 11:00 PM
Thanks for the comment. I agree. I like that tighter crop as well.

Now, in my editing, I have found another one that I really like... so comments on any of the three would be much appreciated.

Bigger version can be seen at the below URL, third image down.

http://www.naturalexpressions-photo.com/nhppa/

Thanks!

Noelle_Zaleski
03-16-2008, 11:04 PM
OH SWEET! I l love everything about this one accept for moms fist. Try a crop on this one I like it alot!!

Laura_Piazza
03-17-2008, 01:01 AM
Oh, I didn't really notice the that so tried the crop. It didn't really work as well when cropping out the fist. Here is a similar one that I took shortly after, but I think i like hte baby better in the first one. What do you think?



Also can be seen here bigger (fourth one down)

http://www.naturalexpressions-photo.com/nhppa/

Noelle_Zaleski
03-17-2008, 01:25 AM
I do like the baby better in the first one. They are both portraits that a mom will love.

Laura_Piazza
03-17-2008, 01:32 AM
I keep finding more that I like better as I am editing. Here's another one that is much more environmental/non-traditional. I think it's my favorite thus far.

Fifth one down:
http://www.naturalexpressions-photo.com/nhppa/