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Jeff_Dachowski
03-04-2008, 12:44 AM
sky or not sky??

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p179/dachowski/Watcherofthevalleyrevised2.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p179/dachowski/Watcherofthevalleyrevised.jpg

Thanks a bunch!

Jeff

Todd_Reichman
03-04-2008, 12:50 AM
No sky for me - seems to pull my eye away from the kitty.

- trr (totally ignorant of competition)

Marc_Benjamin
03-04-2008, 12:51 AM
no sky but more space!

Andrea_Chapelo
03-04-2008, 01:02 AM
What Marc B said.:)

Stephanie_Millner
03-04-2008, 01:02 AM
no sky. .

Amy_Owens
03-04-2008, 01:08 AM
I agree with no sky.

Joe_Galioto
03-04-2008, 01:26 AM
once again-no sky.
joe

i think you already knew the answer.

Joseph_Miska
03-04-2008, 01:30 AM
No sky...

(this part is just filler text so I can post my reply because "no sky" by itself is too short!)

Liz_Vance
03-04-2008, 01:32 AM
Sky!

Hahaha, just kidding.

No sky.

:)

Michael_Barton
03-04-2008, 01:38 AM
No sky. 72! Ha. Just messing with you! The sky will get stomped on by the judges. Great image. Should do well!

Chris_Padgett
03-04-2008, 01:50 AM
I am going against the grain and saying sky. You might tone it down a little more, but I feel it gives a better sense of place. The first crop seems to tight for me. Just so you know my wife says I am wrong again. I'm use to it.

andiegoodman
03-04-2008, 02:13 AM
I like the no sky image but I would like to see what would happen if you took Chris' advice since I feel the cat is a bit closed in.

Ron_Jackson
03-04-2008, 02:20 AM
No sky for sure. The kitty does seem to be a bit crowded. I would like to see more room especially above his/her head and maybe a tad more to the right of the image. It would be great if you gave it even more of a wide screen ratio add more to the right as well. But especially above the head. Nice shot though.

bob_hancock
03-04-2008, 02:43 AM
What I would do is go with no sky. Add a bit more space to top of your Image. Think you would have more impact.
Just my thoughts, In no way am I an expert!
Bob

Corrie_Zacharias
03-04-2008, 02:49 AM
I'd give him (her?) more room above. In the first picture, it looks as if his head is lowered to keep from hitting the top of the frame. I like the space he has in the second image, but not the sky. That shouldn't be too hard to fix, right? ;)

Lori_Clapp
03-04-2008, 03:14 AM
That shouldn't be too hard to fix, right? ;)

By "fix" she means go back and re-shoot, right? lol.

Seeing as how I am a competition expert and all, I know you are on the edge of your seat awaiting my response. I would score this image 82, but I would like a little more room on top, and a little more of a snarl on the lips. I would like a couple kittens playing in the background, and maybe a little prairie dog peeking up to see what's going on.

Sorry for the waste of time - I just wanted to say I agree with Marc - I love it without the sky, but when you add the brightness of the sky, it takes away the scary/sinister look. It makes him look more like a kittycat. But you know what my opinion is worth as far as comp prints!!

Nylora_Bruleigh
03-04-2008, 03:30 AM
Sky!!!!

Sheep all of you! baaa baaaa! :eek:

where is Michael Imus anyway????

Love ya Jeffy Poo!:D

KirkDarling
03-04-2008, 04:17 AM
I'll go against the grain with Chris.

I prefer sky--it's a mountain lion, doggonit, and it should have a mountain in the background. I like the more definite feeling of place. It also gives the kitty more headroom.

However, you could put some darker, gloomier clouds in that sky to tone it down a bit.

Gene_Paltrineri
03-04-2008, 04:31 AM
No Sky
I agree a little more space above her head might help.
I still think you over did it with the reflector under the chin.....
just kidding.

JohnHeckler
03-04-2008, 06:10 AM
No sky! Tis a "light trap" and takes the viewer out of the frame ... new word I learned this year at MES ... "light trap". Judges must have used it a couple hundred times. I also agree with Marc though ... build in some more head room though.

DiannaAllen
03-04-2008, 07:35 AM
no Sky! :)

JohnMalboeuf
03-04-2008, 11:23 AM
Looks like the "No Skys" have it.

I agree with what everyone else said. Great image.

John

Lori_Clapp
03-04-2008, 01:43 PM
What Marc said again. Are we going in a circle? I think we are back to the beginning!

Lori_Clapp
03-04-2008, 01:44 PM
sorry for my last post that made no sense. I really shouldn't drink this early in the morning.

Don_Chick
03-04-2008, 01:57 PM
That tree is so interesting, I would PS the Cat out of the picture. Balanced with the sky you will easily have a loan image.

Ron_Jackson
03-04-2008, 04:04 PM
That tree is so interesting, I would PS the Cat out of the picture. Balanced with the sky you will easily have a loan image.


Now that is creative thinking!! Everyone else sees the obvious but the master, Don Chick, is able to see the forrest for the trees.

MarilynDillon
03-04-2008, 05:22 PM
I like the sense of place I get from the sky -- without sky - could look like a zoo? My opinion -- first timer, so might not be worth anything. These threads are very entertaining! I would like to see the sky played with a bit to see if it can pop without being a distraction.

Eric_Merrill
03-05-2008, 02:16 PM
No sky. :)


Eric

Keith_A_Howe
03-05-2008, 02:37 PM
Jeff - you asked me last night to look at this and comment. I am not gonna say anything cause I know you know what the right choice is here.














P.S. 27,000,000 forum members can't be wrong.
Keith

Jeff_Dachowski
03-05-2008, 02:58 PM
Thank you everyone for your help. I am going to take your advise and leave the sky in. Thanks so much.
Jeff

Chris_Padgett
03-05-2008, 03:08 PM
Well....myself, Kirk and Marilyn think you're brilliant for making that enlightened decision. :D