View Full Version : commercial shot for critique

03-02-2008, 09:32 PM
Any potential for either of these?

03-03-2008, 12:13 AM
uhhh... what are those?...

03-03-2008, 01:08 AM
They are screws that are used in surgery. Who would have ever thought that they'd be so colorful, huh?

03-03-2008, 07:16 AM
I find the background a bit distracting. This looks like a good catalog shot, and I'm sure that the manufacturer loved it, but the light tones of the background take my eye away from the colors of the screws. It might look a bit snappier with the same arrangement on a sheet of black Lucite. I would also try flipping the top image vertically so that the point of focus is in the upper right hand quadrant with the long blue screw leading your eye up towads that point. Just my opinion...