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Robin_Arkenberg
02-20-2008, 03:23 PM
Is this competition quality?

http://www.RobinsPhotography.com/BW-Comp.jpg

D._Craig_Flory
02-20-2008, 04:05 PM
Hi Robin;

Here is what I see: You would have to come up with a title like "Lost My True Love" or something to show why she looks so sad and forlorn.

There is a lot of stray hair. She is about at the 4th quadrant but is facing right instead of left. There is too much room above her, and to the left, on the image layer. The accent line used too bright a shade. The leaves, or vines, need to be softened and toned down.

Teya_Rutherford
02-20-2008, 04:09 PM
what about a horizontal crop?