How about these?

[Sonya_Swain]

Would these be better??

[Sonya_Swain]

and a couple more..

[Jeff_Dachowski]

Sonya,
Maybe 1 or 3.

On 1 you still have that issue with the arm that goes forever. You don't see any skin, so it seems extra long.

[Sonya_Swain]

a couple more...

[Teya_Rutherford]

something about the whites of the eyes on your girls are too big and bright for me...your color is gorgeous though.

[D._Craig_Flory]

Hi Sonya;

The one I like here is of Christine. Since you already cut off the top of her head ... I cropped it more so the multi-hued hair wasn't as compelling. I hope my presentation gives you some ideas. I toned down her top which was out of key.

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i93/DC47/ChristineEnhanced.jpg

[Sonya_Swain]

Craig... I like that! Thanks for the idea.

[Dave_Cisco]

For my taste, I'm seeing too much Portraiture plugin and most eyes look overworked. Saw the same thing in another thread. This may be a style you want to cultivate for clients, but I think it will be a problem with judges.:)