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Will_Price
01-27-2008, 07:33 PM
untitled as of yet... I know it needs something, any suggestions?:o

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m290/fiddlewish/double1small.jpg

Ron_Jackson
01-27-2008, 07:38 PM
More light? :) I can hardly see it Will. My first thought is separation to the right of the image. I can see the subject holding something but can't make out what it is.

Jeff_Dachowski
01-27-2008, 07:42 PM
Will,
I like the jumping image a lot. It has good lighting, and a nice shape to her figure.

I would caution you on using two images though. I am not saying it can't be done, ust keep in mind that anything can draw a judges eye away from te center of interest. Two wie of a pin stripe, a light area at the edge, another image within the image. My point is that you can easily confuse a judge as to what to look at. On my laptop, which is not calibrated, it does not appear that the profile adds anything to the composition. Take it all with a grain of salt though. I don't always know what I am talking about!!
Jeff

Stan_Lawrence
01-27-2008, 07:53 PM
I agree, I'm not sure two images will score well..... The nose being right at the edge of her face really takes away from the shape of her profile, as does the eye breaking the plane....there are some rules of portraiture that make a lot of sense, not breaking the plane is one of them....:cool:

Will_Price
01-27-2008, 07:56 PM
Thanks, back to square 1.

Will_Price
01-27-2008, 08:27 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m290/fiddlewish/working3small.jpg

thoughts? I lightened it up for the web, the original is darker..

Will_Price
01-27-2008, 08:27 PM
more like this

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m290/fiddlewish/working2small.jpg

Ron_Jackson
01-27-2008, 08:44 PM
Thanks for doing that. I could not see the second image on your first post. I thought it was something she was holding. Now I understand better. Nevermind.